Creative writing instructors and editors can get obsessive about removing passive verbs from fiction. And for good reason. They contribute to sluggish writing and rob writing of vitality.
I've harped on this subject so often I have occasionally caused students to agonize over how to avoid using "was" and other forms of "to be" completely. But that's unnecessary.
You needn't banish every was, were, am, are and is from your writing. Instead, learn when to use these verbs and when not to.
Sometimes I'm guilty of lumping continuous verbs into the same category as passive verbs because both types, used incorrectly, create wordiness and cause slow, turgid writing that could be much livelier.
Occasionally, various forms of "To be" verbs are necessary as linking verbs. I used one in the previous sentence to link verbs to necessary. Other examples:
Often, with extra thought, you can replace even these linking verbs with a stronger verb that strengthens the sentence. For example, "she was thirsty" could become "she needed water."
Nevertheless, both passive verbs and continuous verbs cause problems for writers.
We call a verb passive when a writer uses a "to be" verb to place the focus on the object of the sentence, rather than on the subject, as in the examples below.
Too many passive verbs clutter writing and weaken sentences. Efficient, active verbs reduce wordiness and create more powerful sentences.
Sometimes writers, even experienced ones, also overuse the continuous verb form, which may weaken and slow writing. Often the past or present tense would make writing crisper. For example:
To correctly use the continuous tense, use it only when the action is necessarily ongoing. For example:
The past tense in either of these examples would change the meaning of the sentence, and the past continuous form works better.
Tip: Notice that the word "when" often accompanies the correct use of the continuous form because something interrupts the action.
Questions also correctly use the continuous verb form:
If you know the difference between these verb forms, you may use "was" with confidence when necessary and avoid incorrectly using passive or continuous forms.
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